I went swimming first I did free style I bid 2 laps. I raced Lincoln and Deegan and I got 3 then I went to eat .Next I did back stroke I raced Haki, Shae, and Jasper. I came 2 and then I got dressed and then we went back to School.
Kia ora Jed, My name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms. Well done on creating this blog post about your school’s swimming sports! From all the swimming you did it sure does seem like you had a fantastic day! Swimming used to be one of my favourite things to do when I was younger, however I don’t do it nearly enough now! I used to take swimming lessons every week, and would visit my grandparents on the weekend and spend as much time as I could in their pool! Have you ever taken swimming lessons? How often do you go swimming? You mentioned in your post how you came third place in freestyle and second place in backstroke. You must be extremely proud of your efforts, congratulations! Quick Tip- It would be great if you could draw a picture of yourself at your swimming sports and upload it to this blog post. Not only would it add a nice pop of colour to your blog, but it also gives you another opportunity to share some of your work! Nga mihi
Hi Jed, It must seem a long time ago now that your class went to the swimming sports. Do you remember what you enjoyed the most? What other things have you been doing or learning that you could post about? You could take some photos or use google draw to show other people who are reading your blog. Remember it is always good to write a little bit of information to go with this. I'll check back in a few days to see what you've posted. Mrs Phelps
Kia ora Jed,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms.
Well done on creating this blog post about your school’s swimming sports! From all the swimming you did it sure does seem like you had a fantastic day!
Swimming used to be one of my favourite things to do when I was younger, however I don’t do it nearly enough now! I used to take swimming lessons every week, and would visit my grandparents on the weekend and spend as much time as I could in their pool!
Have you ever taken swimming lessons?
How often do you go swimming?
You mentioned in your post how you came third place in freestyle and second place in backstroke.
You must be extremely proud of your efforts, congratulations!
Quick Tip- It would be great if you could draw a picture of yourself at your swimming sports and upload it to this blog post. Not only would it add a nice pop of colour to your blog, but it also gives you another opportunity to share some of your work!
Nga mihi
Hi Jed,
ReplyDeleteIt must seem a long time ago now that your class went to the swimming sports. Do you remember what you enjoyed the most? What other things have you been doing or learning that you could post about? You could take some photos or use google draw to show other people who are reading your blog. Remember it is always good to write a little bit of information to go with this. I'll check back in a few days to see what you've posted.
Mrs Phelps